A rose bled for the want of a heart
to accept it with its thorn.
The heart bled for the want of another heart
to embrace it with lasting warmth.
Heart’s day or not, the heart bled
in solitude, on or not on loving heart’s day
till one heart’s day
it recovered the true meaning of it.
The heart recognized it as a day
to feast in the love received and given
to celebrate a heart able of loving
even without another heart to reciprocate.
Yet a new loving heart’s day
another heart bleeds for having lost a warm heart.
Hopeful it will also discover the true meaning
of the day to celebrate all loving hearts.
[For my heart broken friend. I love you, buddy.]
lovely…
A++
Very sweet of you to dedicate this to a friend! Happy days amiga!
this is full of love and tenderness.
beautifully written poem- very, very beautifully.
trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/free-soul-14th-feb-2011/
a lovely poem. very beautifully written.
trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/free-soul-14th-feb-2011/
great write.. happy valentines.. here’s mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
awww such a sweet dedication..and it brought back the love i have lost a year ago….
Ahh! A great verse for a heart broken buddy… Liked it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
Impressive- well written!
Hopeful towards the end- although sad throughout..
Happy Valentine’s Day
Hugs xxx
One heart is a lonely number, especially on Valentine’s Day. Well written poem. Love is still waiting to be
answered.
Lovely! Happy Valentine!
Very nice. There are so many kinds of love for a heart to embrace. I hope things work out for your friend!
Beautiful and simple! Well done! I loved the wordplay!
“to celebrate a heart able of loving” nice the true meaning of giving and loving. xo
A beautiful write…hope your friend found comfort from your poem.
So so beautiful, and very darned true!!
“The heart recognized it as a day
to feast in the love received and given
to celebrate a heart able of loving
even without another heart to reciprocate.” — and yet, the cycle of love/pain/love continues…
A fabulous write!
This is such a beautiful, touching poem. It’s so nice to hear about love besides the romantic. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/love-thyself/
Ah, something for ‘us’ then eh! Great read.
Slickly written and with such power in the message, great write!
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