Let me cry tonight
December 26, 2010 24 Comments
Let me cry tonight
I am a mere shadow
that coils your soul
my face is forgotten
which was etched in many hearts
Let me cry tonight
my voice doesn’t echo
which sang poetry
my songs fed barren hearts
as others fed mine
Let me cry tonight
no more colours flash in my eyes
which were once deep with them
like smoke I drift aimlessly
between bleak lives
Let me cry tonight
I am a bewildered spirit
eclipsed by my anonymity
threatening to efface my identity
of being existent
Let me cry tonight
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powerful imagery,
love the flow.
beautiful delivery of your emotions…
hope you well.
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Such sadness it this verse…expressed so very well….have a wonderful new year!
i am a mere shadow that coils your soul… that’s enough to cry about… love to read.
lovely! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/12/06/time-is-not-the-essence/
my songs fed barren hearts– beauty u have filled in tragedy.
Very sad yet beautiful too. I like the flow of the poem, with the repeated opening line.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/27/stocking-filler/
Wishing you a Wonderful New Year with no tears and lovely smiles! All the best amiga, keep writing such beauties!
I so so relate to this :
Let me cry tonight
my voice doesn’t echo
which sang poetry
my songs fed barren hearts
as others fed mine
wonderfully said ..
powerful demonstration of a sad emotion…
well done, share up to 3 poems if you wish. have fun!
Happy New Year!
Thanks for the support all the way..you rock.
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very nice, comes close to my own piece. http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/27/it-hurts-just-the-same/
I was completely intrigued by the photo/image. It goes with your words so well. People don’t see her… they leave her alone… let her cry.
http://rhymemeasmile.blogspot.com/2010/12/drunken-turtle-pirate-road-trip.html
Amazing words and what a perfect image for them. I am impressed and learning as I read.
QMM
Such sadness expressed beautifully. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/12/26/nature-celebrates/
The repetition carries sadness and beauty all through the poem. I enjoyed reading your post although I’m wishing you a more happy year ahead.
Beautiful even in sadness
, amazingly written =D
Oh and a side note, you are invited!
From 10:01 a.m. Monday December 27,2010 until 10:01 a.m. Saturday January 8, 2011 (CST), think about what you want to have, do and wish for this upcoming new year. After that, use them to create a poem, short fiction, prose, haiku or anything you can think of and link them in using the comment panel on this post:
http://riikainfinityy.com/2010/12/28/wishylissy-for-2011/
Share your dreams, wish list and wishes over here as the new year comes greeting on us!
Note that you don’t have to be a poet or blogger in order to do it but a link to where your work can be seen by other audiences. Do ask your friends to join in the fun as well!^_^
Cheers and have a wonderful year ahead=D
Sadness but beautiful
Beautiful piece. And great image. Poem on!
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/12/28/motm/
It is like a song..
An emotional one but beautifully written
happy 2011.
Thanks for the hearty support of 2010.
take good care.
Beautiful express of sadness felt. Takes one right into it … Well done.
the echo of a distant voice, echoing through the night..crying silent into the darkness….
I’m glad to have discovered your poetry through the wonderful interview with Blaga. You have a special way with words that is very touching and uplifting. A simple open expression delivers sadness so well through your lines.
luvs this too. i’ll be visiting you more often for sure
Such sadness – expressed so beautfully. I really like the flow of this one xx