Just a drop
November 11, 2010 12 Comments
Picture by Launan T Dorji
Somewhere I stand
the ocean I see
I am just a drop
in the ocean
but without me
the ocean wouldn’t be complete
[For my 4th King. Happy Birthday Your Majesty, You are the world.]
I write for my pleasure and amusement because, in words I find comfort and happiness.
Wow wow…
even with me I guess
I meant to write “Even Without ME”
Beautiful sentiment and poem. I’ve shared on my FB page as one of my two fave blog posts today
Thank you. In fact I was planning to alter the poem a bit. ‘I’ to ‘we’. One of my readers suggested, it was too narcissist. Your comment tells me you understood it the way I wanted people to. Thank you loads.
I share the same…YOUR MAJESTY, WE LOVE YOU SO MUCH. MAY YOU BE HAPPY AND WELL ALWAYS!!!
Very well said Aurora!! Loved each word of it.. So simple and yet so strong!! Love xx
Your poetry is amazing…with supporters such as you stand beside us, we can continue our efforts and make the potluck event more enjoyable for its large number of entries, multiple levels or types of talents, and authentic enjoyment of poetry and poetry reading…Come in any time when we are open, feel free to ask questions and read others.
Thank you in advance.
Have A Weekend A Graceful As Your Spirits.
xoxox
I love this. Short but vivid and meaningful!
The role we play may be far more important than most think since we are needed to complete it…well said.
This is so great. Short, but powerful.
Cheers!
This is nice, your inspiration is doing just fine
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simply splendid!…there is so much in those few lines……..
loved it!